Did you know, you were the first person to friend me here! I've never looked back, lol.
I was thinking this morning, the queue is suspiciously quiet. I wonder if it's the quiet before the storm...
I did some revision to the chapter, following your advice. I have a feeling it reads smoother now. Also added a whole chunk from Ch 2 to Ch 1 so it now ends with her leaving. *nods* I'm happier with it now. Will send later.
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Did you know, you were the first person to friend me here! I've never looked back, lol.
I was thinking this morning, the queue is suspiciously quiet. I wonder if it's the quiet before the storm...
I did some revision to the chapter, following your advice. I have a feeling it reads smoother now. Also added a whole chunk from Ch 2 to Ch 1 so it now ends with her leaving. *nods* I'm happier with it now. Will send later.